SFaPiL2's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chipbare]

Arcadish fun

This would be fun in some kind of retarded platform flash-game :o).

The melody is very well done and I found that the repetitiveness (as the others wrote) is actually a good thing if this song were used in a game since it shouldn't completely distract the gamer.

However, keep in mind that you should add some more layers in future songs (maybe add some strings or pads in the background in order to not make it sound too empty).

Keep up the good work :o).

4/5
9/10

chubby-chobby responds:

yeah this was my first try at it, now i look back at it i wish i'd used a slightly more raw 'chip' voice.
In future i might try and mix this style with others a little more in future.
thanks for the review =)

[KID POW! Teddies Picnic]

LOL... the other side of you!

After listening to all the other serious-sounding songs you made this is a BIG contrast :o).

It's a very jolly, merry, happy, festive (and so on and so forth) song! I could see kids jumping on the sofa with this music.

Not my style, but it's still well done. There's seems to be nothing wrong with the song.

10/10
5/5

Good job once more.

Stalagmite responds:

yay! lol. cetainly is my "other" side. i compose kids music too! i host a puppet show you see, and they gotta boogy with mr jingles! LOL.
i am glad you couldnt find faults with it! but i can lol thanks so much for these reviews. i really do appreciate it!

[change of emotion]

Dude!

I thought the piano was a recording! That is a very natural feel you're giving of the presets man! It seems almost live.

I also notice that you're the king of relax. Cheers! When I'll need some music to study or read a book I'll surely download your music first!

Favouring you as an artist. Keep up the awesome work!

Stalagmite responds:

yay! i am favoured! woopy! lol. i will certainly work on my relaxing comps now. i wont bother with dance or anything. its a shame i have no current program enabling me to have the same settings on my piano, so i will have to work for another couple of days to get it right! doh!
I see my relaxing ones are what get peeps going, so i promise i wont sneek up on you with another "kid pow" mostrosity! lol. thanks a bunch. and take care mr Physicist! :D:D:D we could propably collab at some point? maybe if you have the time... or at least until you learn how to manipulate or create time LOL. :D

[The Ribbon]

Wow...

The sound is very nice, but the bass and drums are covering the piano and other instruments. Damn it! It could've been the perfect music for a sci-fi-manga serious moment.

Maybe the beat seems a little clumsy, but it's always interesting to find NEW ways to create a beat, don't you think? ;o)

I really appreciated. Great job (as always from what I've heard so far)

Stalagmite responds:

thanks! i never thought of it like that. i am sorry for ruining your tender anime moment their kind sir! lol. if i had the original file i would send it to you without the drums. yayness on a stick. and thanks for your generous reviews! :D :D :D truly valued.

[The escape...]

LOL Ozzy93

Ozzy93 made me laugh my ass off. I don't really see it in a Lesbian softcore porn scene, BUT in a very serious/poetic flash.

There seems to be a strange sound from 0:14 to 0:47 that sounds like when you switch on the gas in a stove.

The song's mood is almost indefinite and would fit very nicely in a scene such as this one:

"...The forest fire extinguished and there is a desolate silence all around... slowly the animals that survive emerge from their shelters and see what's left of the forest. Little by little, life will return to those barren grounds to their former beauty..."

Excellent job. You're really good.

Stalagmite responds:

lol! wicked. i think i did leave the gas on! no from what i remember with this song,, i added what was supposed to be "crickets and bugs" sound. to enhance the "life" of the peice. add more organics to it... However, it does sound terrible. i never noticed it till you said! lol. thanks alot for your review! :D:D:D

[listening makes it worse]

Nice

You're good at the piano man. Congrats.

From 0:00 to 1:47 this was perfect lounge-music to me.

However, I must agree with shatteredreamer. The conclusion didn't seem like one. I was craving a continuation ;o).

Fantastic job.

Stalagmite responds:

yayness! it certainly does not end well i will give you that! I am glad you can chill with it! and thanks for the reviews as well! you dont have to repay me or anything! lol. i will definately conclude my improves better... if i can fit it in! lol.
thanks again buddy!

[Love, As I Know It (MAC9)]

Say what?!

"meh, she'll never know" : Are you out of your mind?! Just express your feeling to her while playing this! The worst that could happen is that she'd say no... If so, she's either with someone else or deaf ;o).

Very beautiful composition, btw. Seems like one of those Trilogy diamond black-and-white publicities :o).

Congrats.

Zero123Music responds:

hehe I don't fancy anymore anyways ;) i just thought she should get credit for the inspiration.

thanks for the review
and I love the smiley ;o)

[Is This True Love? (Piano)]

You're 13 ?!

Apart from the fact that you made some really good compositions from what I've heard (imho), I'm very surprised that a person your age can come up with such emotion.

Congratulations.
Fav'ing this for sure.

Zero123Music responds:

Thanks alot sFaPil2 ^^

i'm 13 :) but I just don't like the fact that some people gimme a better score cause of my age.

i'm not complaining xD

thanks again :D
>>Zero123Music

[.:Circuit_Adam:.]

Very interesting!

Great job! This would be perfect in some menu and/or infiltration scene.

The beat is pretty cool and the sound effects were nicely put (they weren't annoying at all).

The bass and the synth melody were a very nice touch that gave it a very interesting sound.

However, there was a moment (1:18-1:42) that it felt a bit too crowded with instruments.

I gave you a 3/5, but I don't understand the idiots that give 0's and 1's. This didn't deserve such a low average. Keep up the good work.

xenith800 responds:

Thanks! The ones giving 0's and 1's are just haters. They can eat their hearts out for all I care though...

[[T] Calm Motion]

hmmm..

Why is the sound heard only in my left headphone?

Kind of boring. The riff wasn't neither too bad nor too good.

It needs a beat, a bass and some strings.

Better luck next time ;o)

P.S. I hate zero bombers too (unless the music is just a bunch of noise: not in your case)

tomashcu responds:

yeah like four people voted 0 and it was down to 0.25

they're like bees at davids farm

fucken bee zero bombers

yeah I kinda reckon it needs a bass and stuff so yeah lol

i probobly wont finish it tho :(